There was only one type of criticism in the comments and that was that the story was unrealistic for a few reasons. We were much more interested in bringing my co-authors darkest fantasies into view. But, that being said, this newest story is very realistic to both of us, to the point of being autobiographical in parts, then to depicting many of our fantasies that could easily become real under the right circumstances.I admit we got to the point where we felt and became the characters, or they became us. You, the readers, can wonder what parts we have already explored and what parts might be in our future.Let's just say we became very emotionally invested in what we wrote. It will be interesting to see if this realism is what most readers want, or the extreme of the first two stories.One change up in this story's presentation is that my co-author wrote the first part of each chapter and I wrote the end of each. And prefer vanilla tart flavored froyo at Yogurtdreams.I must have been the only girl on campus without pierced ears. I got into UCLA, which for my parents was a deep disappointment.It was not about grades, but about extra curricular activities, I think.I was too short at 5'4" to be a real model, but if I could somehow have a secret part time job, with the guarantee that my face would not be shown completely, well, that would be the best of all worlds.The location on Sunset Blvd in Hollywood was not far from campus and while I would not venture there at night, in broad daylight, it had to be safe.
If had been up to my parents, vanilla would have been my flavor of choice.20 Log 20 Log 20 Log 20 Log 20 Log 2004 Log Dwarf Fortress started October 2002, this log was started around the same time as the "back to the dwarf game" thread.Author's Note: Our first two stories have been well received and we thank all our readers for their comments and support.It was already , so I had to go directly home, or face an inquisition that I might not have survived.I was totally unable to lie and deceive my parents.